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February 11, 2005
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slip my back behind the covers,
close the curtains burry me,
darkened room and blackened dreams,
and all I have is nightmares to digest.
mummys little fuck up,
daddys little forgotten dream,
if only he could have been greater,
if only he could have spoken his mind,
if only he could have dreamed of more than dreams themselves,
if only he could have been plastic,
maybe he'd still be here today.
but mummys little fuck up,
daddys little forgoten dream,
is cold,
dead,
burried,
six feet under.
no set template, no set meaning. nothing. enjoy.
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:icondarkangel15033:
wow....

*in awe* this is absolutely beautiful!!!

*is fav'ing as we speak*
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:iconthe-best-deceptions:
i really like this, it might not have a set meaning but to me it shows how the pressure of parents and their hopes can drive someone to the pit of despair.....i love this :) tis great
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:iconrainbowblossom:
i think it would be better if this was longer :hmm: but i still likes it :hug:
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:iconchildofthekorn666:
Good work. This is good. *Huggggggz*
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:iconmightymartynus:
very cool man. love it. for future reference though, buried and bury have only one "r"


whinge over. great work:D
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:icontoo-disturbed:
cheers martyn
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:iconmightymartynus:
no worries bro. everything ok? catch me in messenger if you need me.
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